Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Metaphor

Hatred


"Hatred" kills heart in the brightness.
Wearing a shiny and adorable smile,
Heart is taken breath away under the cold and sarcastic smile.

Sarcastic smile by "MyOnlyName"


2 comments:

  1. Dear RED-BLUE WAVE, I am pulled into your poem about "hatred" because of the image. You have chosen such a fashionable image to dress HATRED. And in doing so, "he" seems so skill, so sophisticated and capable of harming someone.

    Your words "kills heart in brightness" takes my breath away! Who or what is this HATRED?

    You've succeeded in giving me something to think about and to be wary of!

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    1. Thanks for vising my playground, Hallelujah Truth.
      I want to write about the smile of contradiction. Sometimes people want to hide their "hatred" behind big smiling in front of people who really dislike. The Heart means people who are pure, naive and innocent. Sometimes the Heart means people who fall in love with something or someone. People trust their partner but finally, they will be betrayed. I would like to point out a modern society which are the world filled with Betray and Distrust.

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